hello..!! okai as a start great choice in making it b&w and having the blood be in red...STANDS OUT..!! what could have added to the beauty and message of this pic would be if the lips were a bit darker, cz it common to see a smokers lips to be dark..another thing that i think would be better is if there was a strip of smoke coming from the end of the cigarette to show that it is in the present, as in the cigarette is lighted. overall the pic is amazing, and u have done an extremely wonderful job in sending out a message that many people are neglecting these days.

best of all

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